Asked about, requested, POSTED!

Good Afternooooon. =]

I wasn't going to post today, I wasn't sure what to put up, but thanks to CHARLOTTE I now have a poem I can post. I asked her which one I should put up, and this was the one she told me to post. So thank you dude! It's called 'Immortality'. Take a looooooook. =]

Immortality,

Is a word that means,

Live forever,

So it seems,

It means to live through,

Wares and rows,

And keep a smile,

Through all the frowns,

And to,

Keep living on,

Even though,

Everyone else has gone,

To go through saddness,

And through tears,

From losing people,

Throughout the years,

But no-one wants,

To live this way,

Losing people,

Everyday,

But there is another way,

To keep living on,

Through thoughts and memories,

After you're gone,

Through dreams and hopes,

You'll meet again,

So you can,

Be in peace then,

Immortality,

Is a word that means,

Live forever,

In loved one's dreams.

That was written a while ago now. Quite an ooold one. I hope ya's like it though. =]

My writings mucked up. What the hell's going on!? =S!!!

Gahh I can't sort it! I tried! It's not working! =[

Don't matter...

Anyway.

Tell me what you thought of that. I don't like my older ones much, but tell me how it is, honestly. Please and thank you!

If you know me and you've read some of my poems that aren't up here, please please please request some for me to post. Muuuuuuchly appreciated!!!! =]

Thanks for reading again guys!

Kbye. =]