Wishing you a merry christmas

Happy Christmas eve!!

The big day is nearly here. Excited? So you should be!

I promised that I'd update you on Christmas eve, so here it is. There's no poem unfortunatly; just an update. There's not really much to say, so I just wanna' wish you all a fantastic day tomorrow. I hope you and your friends and family have an amazing day and you get exactly what you wanted from Santa!
Charlotte & family; hope you have a great day too. (Well had, because by the time you read this Christmas will be over.)

Don't forget to watch Doctor Who the Christmas special by the way. It's on at 6 I think? Double check that. Eastenders looks set to be good too, so don't forget that either. How I love Christmas TV.

Now for some mentions.
Shannon, Georgia & Nathan; have a great day guys, gonna' miss yous over the holiday.
Bogac; look at my blog more please? =] Even though you don't celebrate it, have a good day anyway.
And all other friends & my wonderful family; have a great day. =]

Merry Christmas everyone!

Kbye. =]

7 days to go!

Good afternoon. =]

You may be aware that Christmas is just around the corner! I kinda hate it. But no school on the upside! And doesn't it look beautiful outside...It's clouded over again now so we may be in for even more snow! I keep checking the window.

This is probably be the last update until after Christmas, though you never know, I might update once more before then. Actually, if I don't forget, I'll try and post on Christmas eve, just to wish you all a merry Christmas.
But before that, I have a poem for ya'll. Wrote it a few days ago, only just typed it up. Appologies on the break. Now, I don't think this ones amazing, but it's alright. Hope you enjoy it.

I do not understand the world,

And so I stand underneath,

It buzzes up above my brain,

To much for my belief,

The liars of this society –

Flash those before my eyes,

With the monsters in creation,

Unable to say why

They continue their selfish treason,

While we – the peasants suffer,

I – the lonely lamb,

And they the ones of slaughter.

Upon their podium they drone,

Monotonous in their expression,

And those affected watch and wait,

For the termination of their possession.

A whizz of cloud full up with

Exploding pointless nothing,

Times of conflict while we question:

When will civilisation be king?

That was called 'The world around me'. I partially wrote that after two exams were over, then finished it at home. Hope its ok. =]

I'll leave you in peace now guys. Enjoy the rest of your snow days if you've got it, and don't forget your advent calendar! Have a good week running upto Christmas, and hopefully you'll be in for another post closer to the time. If not; Merry Christmas!

Kbye. =]

As promised: Part 2

Hello and welcome to part two!

I said yesterday that you would be in for a double dosage of Smudgesaysso. And here it is! I shall be uploading the second poem for you all, but first a quick update on life. I don't think you care; but I'm gonna tell you all anyway.

The mocks have started. (Warning: I may not post often because of this.) Today I had History, then additional science.

I failed science.

I'm exausted. I hate exams like anyone else does, and I just wanted to sleep for the rest of the day afterwards. You're lucky I'm writing this, I could be asleep! Joke, I don't want to sleep right now.
So yeah.
Back to the poem.
Ok, so I'm gonna' explain why the poem has been written and who it is in the point of view of. It's not me. It's not a film character. It's not a book character. It's not a real person - historical or current. The person has no relevence to people generally, the only people who would know what the poem is about would be those of you in my drama class. If you're reading this, you're probably thinking I'm sad for writing this about her, but I think it's relatable. 
Basically; the girl has rumours spread about her, she may be the new girl who everyone finds weird, but she is getting greif at school, at home, anywhere really. It's been a while and everything has built up a bit too much in her mind. The poem is basically her thoughts, what she'd like to see and feel. If you've ever felt like I've just described, you might find it relates to you? I don't know; I think I've felt this way in the past. (I'm not psycotic. Everyone feels like this sometime I think, it just doesn't actually amount to the consiquences you say or think.) Anyway. The poem's called 'The day the smiles stopped'. Well done Annabelle on winning the naming competition against Shannon. It was decided by the amazing Charlotte. Thanks dude. So yeah; enjoy. =]

Dark red dripping walls:

That’s what I want to see;

Just to see them suffer,

Just as if they’re me.

Their smiling evil faces –

They think that they’re all so great,

That’s just the kind of thing

That fills me up with hate.

I’d like to see them notice

The world in which I’m in,

And to see them try to cope with

What I cannot even begin.

I’d love to hear them cry,

So I’m not the one that has to,

And just to see them struggle

And try to make it through.

They think that I’m the weak one,

Well now who’s crouching low?

A thousand people down;

The entire world to go.

Thanks for reading guys. I've waffled on enough, so I wont torture you with it now aswell. Comment and pass it on please! =]

Oh! And if you have twitter, follow me at Hollie_Cook
I will follow you back no questions asked! Thanks guys!

Kbye. =]

As promised

Heyyyyyy readers!!

I'm back! Again. And this time, it's not just an update...I actually have a poem for you! Oh yes, now you're excited. Well just wait until you hear what I'm about to say next. You're about to be doubley amazed because...............

I have two poems to upload!

Now you're happy right? Unfortunatly I'm a horrible person, and you're only getting one today. But you still get one. The second one isn't very good because it's written in role and people will think it's about me. It's not. I'll explain all if and when I upload it.

So anyway. This one was written in PSE and inspired again by a lesson. Drama. I wont go into why. The actual inspiration was one little part of the lesson and pretty insignificant. But this came out of it so to me it was important. It's called 'The calm after the storm'. Hope ya like it. =]

And so it ends.

The hectic chaos of the vicious swarm

Abruptly turns to nothing.

And the silence is born.

It drifts through the stillness;

Contaminated the atmosphere with

A kind of tension that when you hear,

You too stand still and stiff.

And it’s deadly.

Slowly it infects what’s near

And like a chain reaction

It reproduces fear.

Like a parasite –

It feeds on nerves.

And it feasts upon suspense,

Leaving nothing as evidence when it curves

Throughout its victims.

It cools the air and sends shivers

Hurtling down our spines –

- Oh the silent world it leaves us.

The calm after the storm.

Umm..so yeah. There it is. Hope you all enjoyed it. It took alot of scribbles to get it right so you better appreciate it! I'm joking; if its bad let me know!
Comment.
Send the blog on.
The usual.

Kbye. =]

Happy Decemberrrr !

Heyy!

So December's here, and don't we know it! It's cold right!? The snow is now ice here...I fell over this morning. Almost fell over two other times too. I'm sitting here in pyjamas, fluffy socks and gloves while I write this.

School was open today. Boo! So I don't have a poem to post unfortunatly. Sorry. But I'm looking for inspiration and as soon as I come up with something, I'll post it here. This is basically a post to see what the weathers like for you. Wherever you are, comment and tell me how the snow is (if you have any).

So that's all really. Comment, discuss, I don't mind; I like getting comments! Thanks for reading.

Oh, by the way, good luck to people who have their mocks starting this week or next week. Dreading it? Yeah - me too. German Friday then the full ones next week. Good luck!

Kbye. =]

Once upon a science lesson...

Helloo.

Two posts in one day; you lucky people. This is it. The moment you've all been waiting for. The upload of a brand new poem.
Oh yes ladies and gentlemen, I shall be uploading the poem I have written only today! It's not the one I was planning on I'm afraid. But it's a poem, and isn't that what counts? Of course it is!

As you may have guessed, I wrote this in science today. I know what you're thinking...'don't you take your GCSE's seriously!?' My answer is yes, I do, the poem was in fact inspired by the lesson. We were doing competition in animals, and this poem came about while watching an episode of Life. LOL. The funny thing is, I actually told my teacher that the lesson had inspired me, and he read the poem. He liked it. Yay me! He now wants a copy - so he shall get one. He also said he was going to give me a good behaviour managment. All that for not doing that I was supposed to be: watching the film.


It's called 'The fight for survival'. Enjoy and comment guys!

Sunbathing on the browning grass,

They sleep and clean themselves,

And in their groups they sit and watch

And wait – it’s in their cells,

Twitching ears and glistening fangs,

Visible as they yawn,

And in the hazy vapour waves,

The rumble of the floor is born,

It’s quiet buzz of the foreseen fight,

The blur upon the horizon,

Up-bought gravel blocking sight,

Brings alert to all the land,

Aggression about the vibrating terrain,

The herd – fur up on end,

Ears back, in a group they remain,

Attack just around the bend,

The chase is on – they start to run

Their vision blurred by the midday sun

The weight of paws – it weights a tonne

But who will be the stronger one?

The gap; it closes more and more

Up the rise of the lethal claw

Skin and flesh are ripped and torn

The blood-pool of the forest lawn.

Worth the wait right!? I think so, even if you don't. I bet you can guess what I'm going to say next. Well done! Send the blog on and comment! Wow, you're psycic. Respect on that. Being psycic must be awesome.

Anyway, thanks for reading, I will try to upload another poem shortly. Much love guuuys. BOGAC READ MY BLOG FOR GOODNESS SAKE.

Kbye. =]

Random post

This is how my entire German lesson was spent today. Pretty awesome right!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!




HAHAHAHA Shannon got her account blocked! Playing games Shannon, tut tut.





Kbye. =]

(maybe uploading later, maybe not. =])

Coming Soon..!

Coming soon to a computer (or laptop) screen near you!...

The latest poem written by the autor of Smudgesaysblog! What will it be like, do I hear you say? Well, see for yourselves with the next blog post uploaded! (possibly)

Yes, you did read that right! There will be another poem upload sooner than was first thought! I know what you're thinking: it cannot be true! It's madness! Well, it is true, because I'm working on the latest one right now! (well not right now, because right now im working on writing this load of rubbish for your entertainment!) But you get what I mean, right!?

I bet right now you're on the edge of your seats, bouncing with the excitment of soon being able to read another MASTERPIECE by the one and only me! Your minds are working overtime, trying to work out what words will be put into poetrey this time, what amazing theme it will be on, and wheather you will even like it! But I assure you, I will get it up as soon as I can! Please do not hurt yourselves bouncing off the walls in anticipation, I cannot give up my time to hospitals in order to help you recover! If you really do bounce off walls when you hear my poems will be uploaded here - you may want to seek prefessional help; call the men in the white coats, they're nice, trust me! They give you special jackets that let you hug yourself, and they give you amazing rooms that actually have bouncy walls! Oh yes ladies and gentlemen! You will be able to bounce off walls, and not get bruises!

Enough of all this already! God you do go on!

Sorry about that, I got into it a bit too much.

The point was to get you excited, and make you check back more to see if it's up, which it will be!
Enjoy the wait!!!!!!!!!

Kbye. =]

Morning

Heyy.

Sorry I didn't post yesterday with my other poem, I was going to, but I didn't. Children in need was on. And the internet was blocked in German. Bad times.

Anyway, happy Saturday! The weekend is here!

Now for my next poem. I wrote this the day after my last one, and I havn't written anymore since, so this might be the post before another longish break. But I'll try to avoid that happening and give it a go at writing another poem pretty soon.

Oh and, I'm past 200 blog views! Thanks for checking back so much people! But let's try and get it past 300 now, which means you can't give up on me. You gotta' keep coming back and checking for new posts, and keep sending this on, because if you don't the page views wont go up!

Back to the poem. This one's called 'What claws at the sky'. Took me a while to name it to bo honest. But that's what I came up with and it's quite good in my opinion. =]

Hope you like it. =]

These creatures and their bony arms,

Crooked dark and sinister,

Chained to them its skeletal hands,

Each with needy fingers,

Its body lost within the dark,

Consumed by the night time parasite,

Crippled with age while its arms,

Groan in the wind of the night,

Echoed cries it creaks and shivers,

Its fingers in position,

Ready to grip the passers by,

And claim the undeserving victim,

In the shadow of the glowing moon,

Illuminated by its touch,

The being stands tall and bare and broken,

And the night sky it does clutch.

Please tell me what you think. My font's gone weird again. =/

Send this on, I really appreciate your help with getting these out, I love poetry and I want my poems to be read. You're helping by sending them on, so please do!

On another note, today is the 20th November. I wanna' mention someone very missed today. Great Nanny, you'll always be missed by us, and we love you. Happy Birthday for today. =]

Ok, thanks for reading people. SEND IT ON.

Kbye. =]

Brand new poooem =]

Heyy strangers!

Guess who's baaack!? Yes..it is me.
And I have GOOD news! I have written a poem. TWO poems. Oh yes. Two brand new poems, that I wrote last night and this morning on the bus. I'm so cool! And I actually like them. WOW.
Shannon, now you can stop moaning at me that I havn't written a blog for so long. Because I am! =]
The poem is called 'The Clown'. Try and guess what it's about. Go on. Have a go. You don't know? Oh come on...are you really that stupid? It's about a clown! Godddddddd... =]

White-

His face on which his shining eyes stare

Riddled with tormented laughter,

The horror of smiling blood rubies as they glare,

Watching – waiting,

His devil horned downward hair

Representing what he is

The reoccurring nightmare,

Echoes off your walls

His intimidating laughter that he enjoys to share

Escaping from his painted lips

Through the smile that he bares

To hide his true intent of sin,

The evil hearted child scaring thing.

^_^ Scary right? Well, I think so annyway. You may have guessed by now that I'm not a fan of clowns. I mean no offence to those of you who aspire to become a clown. You're not all evil hearted child scaring things. Most of you are generally nice. I just find clowns scary. So if you are, or one day will be a clown, please only come see me when you look like you, and not a clown. Kthanks.

Now for an update on school work. It sucks. Got mocks in a few weeks. And I have a tonne of maths to do too. It's getting to the point where I'm snapping at everyone who talks to me because I'm struggling with maths.
Sorry guys.
Maths is really the worst subject I learn. Can't be bothered with it anymore. Not too long though, end of the year = end of maths. FOR GOOD. I feel bad for you guys who are taking maths as an A level.

Anyway. Thanks for reading guys ! =]

Kbye. =]

Update

Yooooo readers =]

I have been told to write this because shannon wants me to. Hi shannon. =]
First I wanna say Happy Birthdayyyy to Annabelle. Shes 16 now! Legally allowed to do naughty things ^-^

...Like the lottery...gambling is bad Annabelle, don't do it. So yeah, Happy 16th! 08-11-10.

Also happy birthday to my nanaaaaa for the same day. Hi Naaaaaaaaaana =]

K so anyway. I gots nothing to say. =[
Not good.

I'm still thinkin up poem ideas. Nothing new at the mo.

OH AND GOOD NEWS. I FINISHED MY GERMAN WORK. HELL FRIKKEN YES. Took me long enough...

Anyway. That is all.

Kbye. =]

New poem...

Heyy.

Ok, so I wrote a poem like...just now. To be honest with you I really don't like it. (dont tell me off char.=p) But seriously, I want honest opinions especially for this one. I need to know if I'm being stupid or not. Don't take this as an oppertunity to call me stupid as I shall NOT be amused... =[

The poems called 'Angels and Demons', so tell me what yous think. =]

Demons like to show their strength,

And so they show it all,

And in their packs they hunt their victims,

So they may hear them bawl,

While in the corner an angel watches,

Unable to halt the terror,

For alone he stands while they’re in many,

Foreseeing human error,

And all around the angels stand,

One alone but all are great,

And together they rise and take a stand,

To create the better fate,

Shadow over the demons,

The devils pride and joy,

And strip them of their teeth and claws,

And confiscate their toys,

And the angels come together,

Just for one good deed,

To make the devil stand alone,

While the angels, together succeed.

Comments below please. =] God only knows why the font wont go normal ... Comic Sans isn't even a font on here...

Anyway, oooh it's back to normal !

Anyway, Thanks for reading if you did, send my blog on, and follow me on twitter please!
My twitter username is smudge300495. I can't actually get on it at the moment, so I don't know if you're having the same troubles as me, but when you can, follow me please ! Thanks alot guys.

Kbye. =]

My appologies on the break !

Hiiiiiiii =]

To be honest, if Shannon hadn't asked me to post, I probably wouldn't have. Bad right?... Na, the truth is I havn't got many more great poems to put up, so I'm stuck for choice. But I found this one, so it might be the last one for quite a while. Sucks...
I'll try and find inspiration for a new one though. I know I've been saying that for ages, but for some reason I dont get inspired eaily anymore. I'm working on my major writers block, really I am... =[

Anyway, this one is called 'Missing you'. Hope you like it.

Sometimes I look up at the sky,

I think of you up there now,

It's not easy to know I'll never see you again,

But i know i just have to bare it somehow...

I didn't know it could hurt this much,

With just 2 people no longer there,

You used to tell me everything would be alright,

Now it feels no-one cares...

I'll lay awake at night thinking of you,

Praying to see you looking down on me,

But no...no matter how hard I try,

It's only the stars I see...

I used to say the biggest star in the sky was you,

And that's the one I'd wish upon,

So it felt like you were still with me,

Even thought i knew you were gone...

The day the news came,

I tried to keep strong,

I held in my tears,

For so very long...

I didnt't cry around people,

Because it felt weird,

One minute you were there,

The next you'd disapeared...

If i could have one wish,

It'd be that you'd come back,

To give me the reasurance,

That I now lack...

But as long as i dream of you,

Once in a while,

Maybe...just maybe...

That'll be enough for me to force a smile...

And as long as i keep the hope,

That one day I'll see you again,

I'll live my life happy,

And that smile will remain...

There's ya go. Tell me what you think please. =] Much looooove guys.
Shannon, thanks for reminding me ! And keep posting on yours, I like your songs. =]

Kbye. =]

It has been a whole week!

WOW It's been a week.

I have nothing to update. I havnt written anything since, and I have nothing awesome to say. I could type and type and type, but whats the point? it's boring for us both. So I wont. I will post a poem though. I do not take full credit for this. Charlotte helped. It's called 'The warriors prophecy'. I quite like it. It was HARD to write.

The one who alone has roamed the land,
now an army behind him, his sword in hand,
You are on what reality depends,
To stop the fire, the hell that he sends
The warrior of the heavens and sky,
bring forward your strength, the time is Nye

I think it's good. =] So yeah, Charlotte AND me wrote this one. Tell me what you think. =] She shall be informed on feeback. TY!

Since I have very little else worth saying, I am going to leave this now. I will say this first though. I'm getting somewhere with my German coursework! It's hard though. But yeah, I'm getting there.

Laterz!!

Kbye. =]

BRAND NEW POEM!!!

Helloooooooooooooooooooooooooooo. =]

I wrote a new poem!! It wasnt even half an hour ago that I finished it! Thought I'd post it, see what you guys think, because I havn't written an amazing one in a while, and I'm kinda' hoping this one is close, so please read it and comment, and send my blog on. =]

This is called 'Blessed is life'. Thanks to Charlotte for the name! =]
(She's good with names.)

As we walk in the darkness of the past of our sins,
They echo around us and sing haunting hymns,
As we freeze in the coldness of a life full of lies,
They flash like we’re dying right in front of our eyes,
And as the cold hand of hate takes our hand in grasp,
We push it away so we can forget all our pasts,
And as each day came we took it as it did,
A head full of hopes and regret one forbids,
And we gaze at our future full of choices of our past,
While they swirl in a cloud of memories that will last,
With a heart full of goals that beats against our chest,
We may look back and realise the life with which we were blessed.


That's the poem. (I never know how to start writing properly after I put the poems in if I'm honest.) I actually quite like that poem, and concidering how early it is, thats an acheivment. Yay me! =]

So yeah, like I said, please comment, tell me what you think and pass it on. Many thanks if you do. =]

Thanks for reading guyyyyys!!!

Kbye. =]

Once again from inside German !

Rebel much!? ^^

Yeah so hi. As you may have gathered, I am in German again. However this time there is no teacher. I'm in her office doing coursework. Yeah, I am actually doing something this time. Just felt I should upload this poem as I wrote it for Drama, but I like it, so I feel I should show yous. =]

It's called...Madness? I don't know to be honest but I'm gonna call it madness now. Enjoy. =]

Slowly slipping under until I’m fast asleep,

My mind in the clouds, but with the pressure of the ocean deep,

The birds are flying backwards, and I think I’m on my own,

But over in the corner, I have my own clone,

As I start to approach it, it walks at the same pace,

Until we reach each other and we’re face to face,

It copies my every movement, simultaneously,

And then it disappears from right in front of me,

Time starts to move faster and the clocks all start to melt,

Then I start to remember the immense loneliness I felt,

Soon everything around me starts turning into slop,

The room keeps getting darker as if it will never stop,

When everything has melted, I am nowhere no-when,

I feel like I will never see the light of day again,

I don’t know what to do except to scream and yell,

But even if I did, who would there be to tell?

Everything I shout is echoed back at me,

And everywhere I look there is nothing I can see,

This feeling of fear just seems to never end,

But then I wake up, back in the institution again.

TADA. Not bad for in a lesson. I actually concentrated! =o

I'm here with Shannon again. HI SHANNON.

Well, I'm going to get back to doing my work now, this was just a quick post to upload this. Hope you liked it. Comment and shizz. THANK YOU!

Kbye. =]

Back to normal...

Hi guyssssss =]

Ok, so earliers post was a bit random, off topic, pointless, and just plain weird. So this is to make up for it. Guess what's going in this one!? Go on, guess! GUESS!!! Ok then! Don't guess!

My nose wont stop itching!

Since you're too lazy to guess, I'll have you tell you. It's a poem. DERR. =]
This one's called 'Like a smile to a face'. Names don't have much effort alot of the time. Their not the bit people like to read after all, are they? No...no they are not. =] (Yes...that was me answering my own question.)

Here goes. =]

A dark landscape,
For as far as the eye can see,
Right off into the distance,
For how ever far it may be,
A flicker of light,
Some stars, few and far apart,
Decreasing in numbers,
Dwindling from the start,
And the moon,
Such a mask of the gloom,
It gives a light,
We know will fade soon,
Like a smile to a face,
Disguising true emotion,
To make you appreciate,
Its beauty and devotion,
And sometimes there’s cloud,
That hides away starlight,
And everything’s darker,
And more open to fright,
And as soon as the moon,
Slips away behind the mist,
We see the night sky for itself,
With no light to assist.

=O Whacha think!? =]

I love this, I can just type like a strange person who talks to themselves, and people actually enjoy it!

HICCUPS!

Well, again, thanks for reading. YOU OWN. Sorry about the randomness of that last post. Kind of surprised Blogspot worked. Anyway, thank youzzz again!!

Kbye. =]

In german!!

Heeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeello. =] Bienvinidoooo!

I am in German at the moment with SHANNON. WOOOO.

She says "she is the best person in the whole entire world". That is just a matter of opinion though. NOT SAYING I DONT AGREE!!!!!!!!!!!!!

LOVE YOU SHANNON.


charlotte is soooooooooo awesome... but SHANNON IS AWESOMERRRRR :D
we love u Char Char (Sounds kinda like Zja Zja from Eastenders LAWL).
Germanlandish is a frenchish ugly language and Spainsh is sooo much better.. QUE TAL? Cyber People/Fans/Ugly Ducklins/Whoever Reads this.... whatever - ermmmm IFLY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Thankyou for that shannon. Muchly appreciated. (No Problemo Prestogooo)

Ahh how I love Shannon's input...

Kanyway.

I should really do my coursework now. How do you talk German again?...

Kbye. =]

Asked about, requested, POSTED!

Good Afternooooon. =]

I wasn't going to post today, I wasn't sure what to put up, but thanks to CHARLOTTE I now have a poem I can post. I asked her which one I should put up, and this was the one she told me to post. So thank you dude! It's called 'Immortality'. Take a looooooook. =]

Immortality,

Is a word that means,

Live forever,

So it seems,

It means to live through,

Wares and rows,

And keep a smile,

Through all the frowns,

And to,

Keep living on,

Even though,

Everyone else has gone,

To go through saddness,

And through tears,

From losing people,

Throughout the years,

But no-one wants,

To live this way,

Losing people,

Everyday,

But there is another way,

To keep living on,

Through thoughts and memories,

After you're gone,

Through dreams and hopes,

You'll meet again,

So you can,

Be in peace then,

Immortality,

Is a word that means,

Live forever,

In loved one's dreams.

That was written a while ago now. Quite an ooold one. I hope ya's like it though. =]

My writings mucked up. What the hell's going on!? =S!!!

Gahh I can't sort it! I tried! It's not working! =[

Don't matter...

Anyway.

Tell me what you thought of that. I don't like my older ones much, but tell me how it is, honestly. Please and thank you!

If you know me and you've read some of my poems that aren't up here, please please please request some for me to post. Muuuuuuchly appreciated!!!! =]

Thanks for reading again guys!

Kbye. =]

...

Heyy =]

It's been a while since I've poseted. I don't know why that is. But heyy, I'm Back! =]
Right now I should really be doing my maths homework, I have so much to do. But I'd much prefer to be posting another poem up on here. YAY for being a rebel.

But really, I really do need to do it. I only have a couple of weeks to do ALOT. I'll...get to that...soon...

So, now for something less...mathsy...
I'm really forgetting what I've posted and what I havn't...It's not good...
I hope I havn't posted this one, but if I have, you can all read it again! =] It's called 'A spec of light on a black canvas'.

The horizon does fade,
For darkness to creep,
And the sun it does fall,
For life is asleep,
The great balls of fire,
Are dots in the sky,
But a glimmer for us,
For night time is Nye,
They are all but uncovered,
And all but explored,
And all but all seen,
For beyond them is more,
A swirl of a mystery,
And a twister of doubt,
Uncountable numbers,
Of the greatest amount,
The shoot across heaven,
With lights in the sky,
Their wonders are many,
And many have I,
For the light to our dark,
Is dark in itself,
And interest to many,
Whom are much like myself.

Do let me know if I have posted this one already. I'm losing my mind, it's not my fault. The usual applies, comments and that. I type that everytime, I really shouldn't. It's probably annoying.
Well anyway, read it and stuff, and yeah...tell me what you think. I have a facebook specially for the poems, if you know me, message me somehow and I'll give it to you. I'm not on it very often, and there isn't much on there, I prefer putting them up here. Keep reading!

Kbye. =]

Khi. =]

Helloooooooo. =]

It's been a few days now. Miss me? Cooooourse you did!!
I have unfortunatly not written anything new...Need ideas, still looking for inspiration.

I'm actually finding it hard to think of something to write, so I'm gonna' dive right in with another poem. This is called 'Alone in a crowd'. I wrote it on the bus! Hell yes. =]

Here 'tis. =]

A crowded room,
With no-one there,
Eyes looking around,
With a constant stare,
The light of the party,
Completely in dark,
Too much talk to hear,
But a single remark,
They’re laughing at jokes,
They’re laughing at you,
The friends that you know,
Seem the friends that you knew,
And then in the silence,
It’s too loud to bare,
Everyone loves you,
But nobody cares,
Surrounded with friends,
With not a single one in sight,
Kept safe from fears,
And overcome with fright,
All so liberated and free,
And can’t say what’s to be said,
You’re alive and well,
And nothing, and dead.

Not bad for on a bus right? Tell me what you think as normal, I like coming on here and seeing I have comments to approve. Makes me feel all happy and stuff. I like feeling happy ans stuff. =]

HI TYLER !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Kbye.

More words and fullstops

Hi. =]

Thanks for all the comments everyone who has commented. I love you all! I'm glad people like the poems, although I think most people on here have seen them elsewhere anyways. I probably know the majority of you. I don't mind however. I'm not saying I do. I'm just saying. k? K!?

K.

Anyway.

Here's the latest. Well. Latest post anyway. It's literally just been named. It's called 'Paralised'. Here gooooes.

I stand upon the hilltops,
And I wish that I could fly,
I look across the horizon,
The huge wide open sky,
I look down at my feet,
Stuck firm upon the ground,
I try to move but I cannot,
And my mouth it makes no sound,
I watch the gliding eagle,
As he falls down from his cliff,
And into the blue, he’s off,
Yet I still stand here stiff,
I watch him and I wish,
That I could be like he,
Soaring through the atmosphere,
Just the sky and me.

Wacha think!? =] You see why the name is what it is now. I kinda think this one sounds happier than my others if I'm honest. Quite proud of that. =] Go me!

The cat is sleeping on me. Bless him!

Anyway. Back to the point.

So yeah, comment. =]

Thanks guys!! And please please please send it on to your friends. Not the poem. The blog. That would be EVEN better, because then they can read the others and you only have to copy and paste one thing. I'm saving you hassle too!

Kbye. =]

BLOG!

Hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii. =]

I'm starting to lose track of what I've uploaded here now. Blaaaaah.
But now I've found a poem I can put up todaaaaay. =] GO ME.

Kanyway.

I actually have nothing to say. OMG right!? I don't like blogging when I have nothing to say because I start to waffle on about nothing. Clearly. So yeah. Poem.

This is called 'Heavens Sorrow'. Tell me what you think. Again. Derr. Like I would ask you not to. GOD.

Keep reading. =]

Heavens cries,
And angels tears,
That drench the Earth,
With molten fears,
To punish the man,
That has once sinned,
And erase his past,
With a godly wind,
And the branches of,
The human mind,
Will learn to forget,
And leave behind,
The force of he,
His gentle touch,
Yet with such a force,
To do so much,
To cleanse the earth,
Of tortured souls,
That the devil tormented,
With a heart of coal,
And the gates to the fiery,
Pits will open,
As the words of the lord,
Are so boldly spoken,
And the fires of hell,
Will rise from the dark,
Scorching the Earth,
With its cleansing mark,
And heavens storm,
Will meet the rage of the flames,
And doom all those,
Who need be tamed,
And banish them,
From the civilised world,
As he below summons them,
Into his grasp of a hand now curled,
Man will rise,
And man shall fall,
But he who watches over us,
Shall forever more stand tall.

Well!? What do you think!? WELL!?!?! =]

Comment and what not. ME LOVES YOU ALL!

HI TASHA & ANDREW & CONNOR.

kbye. =]

Possibly more pointless words that you will read nonetheless =]

Heyy. =]

I've so far had no suggestions for a title for that poem. I know that someone was trying to think of one but couldn't, so thanks for trying anyway dude.

TITLE ME PEOPLE!!!

Kanyway.

I'm gonna' post another poem here today, this one's called 'Arms of the wood'. I wrote this from a picture on google. I think this is the picture.

This is the picture I think I used.

I wrote it a while ago, could be wrong,.

But I could have used this. =]

It goes with the poem, so it may well be the one I used when I wrote this. Here it is:

The swarm,
So dark it suffocates,
Not light to see,
What in the blackness awaits,
The crowded path,
Hazardous amongst the towers,
The wooden ones,
Above the weeds for flowers,
Dusty,
In the soft heavenly mist,
It chills,
Hiding the monsters that cannot exist,
Howling,
And the silver hanging ball,
Above the world,
And we feel so small,
Traces of people,
Who there once walked,
Giggles and whispers,
Echoes of talks,
Low hanging hands,
Patting on shoulders,
Repeating the warnings,
People once told us,
Not so much a cross road,
But no one way should,
Free us from the grip,
Of the arms of the wood.


Tada. =]

Now you can see why the photo goes with the poem. So yeah, as usual, comment and that. Appreciated. =]

HI CHARLOTTE!

Kbye. =]