BRAND NEW POEM!!!

Helloooooooooooooooooooooooooooo. =]

I wrote a new poem!! It wasnt even half an hour ago that I finished it! Thought I'd post it, see what you guys think, because I havn't written an amazing one in a while, and I'm kinda' hoping this one is close, so please read it and comment, and send my blog on. =]

This is called 'Blessed is life'. Thanks to Charlotte for the name! =]
(She's good with names.)

As we walk in the darkness of the past of our sins,
They echo around us and sing haunting hymns,
As we freeze in the coldness of a life full of lies,
They flash like we’re dying right in front of our eyes,
And as the cold hand of hate takes our hand in grasp,
We push it away so we can forget all our pasts,
And as each day came we took it as it did,
A head full of hopes and regret one forbids,
And we gaze at our future full of choices of our past,
While they swirl in a cloud of memories that will last,
With a heart full of goals that beats against our chest,
We may look back and realise the life with which we were blessed.


That's the poem. (I never know how to start writing properly after I put the poems in if I'm honest.) I actually quite like that poem, and concidering how early it is, thats an acheivment. Yay me! =]

So yeah, like I said, please comment, tell me what you think and pass it on. Many thanks if you do. =]

Thanks for reading guyyyyys!!!

Kbye. =]