Saturday, 30 October 2010

My appologies on the break !

Hiiiiiiii =]

To be honest, if Shannon hadn't asked me to post, I probably wouldn't have. Bad right?... Na, the truth is I havn't got many more great poems to put up, so I'm stuck for choice. But I found this one, so it might be the last one for quite a while. Sucks...
I'll try and find inspiration for a new one though. I know I've been saying that for ages, but for some reason I dont get inspired eaily anymore. I'm working on my major writers block, really I am... =[

Anyway, this one is called 'Missing you'. Hope you like it.

Sometimes I look up at the sky,
I think of you up there now,
It's not easy to know I'll never see you again,
But i know i just have to bare it somehow...
I didn't know it could hurt this much,
With just 2 people no longer there,
You used to tell me everything would be alright,
Now it feels no-one cares...
I'll lay awake at night thinking of you,
Praying to see you looking down on me,
But no...no matter how hard I try,
It's only the stars I see...
I used to say the biggest star in the sky was you,
And that's the one I'd wish upon,
So it felt like you were still with me,
Even thought i knew you were gone...
The day the news came,
I tried to keep strong,
I held in my tears,
For so very long...
I didnt't cry around people,
Because it felt weird,
One minute you were there,
The next you'd disapeared...
If i could have one wish,
It'd be that you'd come back,
To give me the reasurance,
That I now lack...
But as long as i dream of you,
Once in a while,
Maybe...just maybe...
That'll be enough for me to force a smile...
And as long as i keep the hope,
That one day I'll see you again,
I'll live my life happy,
And that smile will remain...


There's ya go. Tell me what you think please. =] Much looooove guys.
Shannon, thanks for reminding me ! And keep posting on yours, I like your songs. =]

Kbye. =]

2 comments:

  1. It's wicked! And Thanks :) - I really wanna advertise and tell people but i dont want it getting to my fam loool... ermmm i love ur poems and u have no inspiration? write one about how great i am... and charlotte.. and georgia... and everyone else.. but yea... cant u make one about like i dno life, what goes on and all that... like kinda what i write my songs about..? But carry on doing what ure doing. ur great! :)

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  2. Thanks =] You've got your blog on private havent you? you should maybe put some more stuff up, then make it public n advertise it, i bet your family would like it anyways lol.
    and yeah the inspiration things a bummer ;/ like, writing about lifes ok and evryfin but..it's like..i need summin specific to ryt about, and normally evryday finks wud giv me summin to ryt about but its harder lately ;/ and i wud ryt one about how awesome u all r lol, but its hard to do that, so ill just tell you insted ! YOU'RE AWESOME!!! :)
    tyyyyyyy dude :) xxx

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