Hai.
I haz another poem. I wrote it like, two minutes ago. I asked Charlotte for another phrase, and then this came about. If I'm honest, I kinda' love it. I won't waffle on, so here's the poem.
Wall, wall. No way out.
Darkened corridors, an echoed shout.
Door at one end, gate at other,
Padlocked, bolted. That stupid blunder.
Lost in smoke, the tick of time,
Fades away the grand clocks chime.
Danger. One red door.
Floating upon the liquid floor.
Exit blocked. There’s no escape.
Windows block the green landscape.
Devil‘s barrier, trap me not.
For the sea is rising up through hopeful’s slot.
It's called 'Trapped between the Devil and the deep blue sea'. Hope you's like it. :)
I really like this one1 (:
ReplyDeleteYou should like make a proper book of all your poems (like typed up and a proper book?..) and then give it in to someone that could publish them or something... you never know, u might end up (if u decide to have kids) seeing ur poems in the english anthologies loool ;)
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I want to get it published one day. I'm building a collection up first though so I have a decent amount of ones I really like to put into a decent sized book. :)
ReplyDeleteI doubt they'd go into anthology, I'd depress people XD Thank you though, means a lot. <3
they would... u would be the most famous poetess.. and some of the poems in there are depressing anyway... but urs are really cool (:
ReplyDeleteno need to thank me, it's the truth :')
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Yeah, I guess, but a lot of mine have pretty dark meanings heh. <3
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