Sunday, 3 April 2011

It's been a while!

I'm sorry for the massive gap in posting! I havn't had anything contrustive to bore you with, so I didn't bother. There wasn't much to update either, and they get a bit tedious anyway because they're of no real importance or interest to you guys even if I had anything to update you on!

But luckily, this isn't a life story or rant, this is a poem. Charlotte noticed I hadn't posted in a while, and she's helping me out with the inspiration side of things by giving me a phrase to create a poem from, by using it as the title, a line for the poem, or even just a prompt for an idea. Her first phrase is now the title of my latest poem, and it's called: 'Impossibilities lie with those who cannot commit'. Deep huh? :)

So go ahead and take a read through, and let me know what you think. I'm happy for comments of a complimentary nature, or CONSTRUCTIVE critisism. I don't like ones that tell me I'm no good and to give up on any dream I have of becomming a poet. Not cool guys. :)

Struggle onward along the path of aims,
Head held high, not hung with shame,
Seek your dreams through constant battle,
Against the odds that feed you prattle,
For if you crumble and then take rest,
You’re sure to limit your possible best,
Feel not tired of unsuccessful tries,
For the end is where achievement lies.

Thanks for reading! Hope you enjoyed it. Feel free to share my blog around, the more people who know the better I think! Love you guys! <3

2 comments:

  1. Constructive CRITICISM for you.
    (the clue is in that sentence :D)

    Erm, it's good (: x

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  2. Hollie edits spelling, ashamed of herself slightly...

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