New poem...

Heyy.

Ok, so I wrote a poem like...just now. To be honest with you I really don't like it. (dont tell me off char.=p) But seriously, I want honest opinions especially for this one. I need to know if I'm being stupid or not. Don't take this as an oppertunity to call me stupid as I shall NOT be amused... =[

The poems called 'Angels and Demons', so tell me what yous think. =]

Demons like to show their strength,

And so they show it all,

And in their packs they hunt their victims,

So they may hear them bawl,

While in the corner an angel watches,

Unable to halt the terror,

For alone he stands while they’re in many,

Foreseeing human error,

And all around the angels stand,

One alone but all are great,

And together they rise and take a stand,

To create the better fate,

Shadow over the demons,

The devils pride and joy,

And strip them of their teeth and claws,

And confiscate their toys,

And the angels come together,

Just for one good deed,

To make the devil stand alone,

While the angels, together succeed.

Comments below please. =] God only knows why the font wont go normal ... Comic Sans isn't even a font on here...

Anyway, oooh it's back to normal !

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Kbye. =]