Wednesday, 24 November 2010

Once upon a science lesson...

Helloo.

Two posts in one day; you lucky people. This is it. The moment you've all been waiting for. The upload of a brand new poem.
Oh yes ladies and gentlemen, I shall be uploading the poem I have written only today! It's not the one I was planning on I'm afraid. But it's a poem, and isn't that what counts? Of course it is!

As you may have guessed, I wrote this in science today. I know what you're thinking...'don't you take your GCSE's seriously!?' My answer is yes, I do, the poem was in fact inspired by the lesson. We were doing competition in animals, and this poem came about while watching an episode of Life. LOL. The funny thing is, I actually told my teacher that the lesson had inspired me, and he read the poem. He liked it. Yay me! He now wants a copy - so he shall get one. He also said he was going to give me a good behaviour managment. All that for not doing that I was supposed to be: watching the film.


It's called 'The fight for survival'. Enjoy and comment guys!

Sunbathing on the browning grass,
They sleep and clean themselves,
And in their groups they sit and watch
And wait – it’s in their cells,
Twitching ears and glistening fangs,
Visible as they yawn,
And in the hazy vapour waves,
The rumble of the floor is born,
It’s quiet buzz of the foreseen fight,
The blur upon the horizon,
Up-bought gravel blocking sight,
Brings alert to all the land,
Aggression about the vibrating terrain,
The herd – fur up on end,
Ears back, in a group they remain,
Attack just around the bend,
The chase is on – they start to run
Their vision blurred by the midday sun
The weight of paws – it weights a tonne
But who will be the stronger one?
The gap; it closes more and more
Up the rise of the lethal claw
Skin and flesh are ripped and torn
The blood-pool of the forest lawn.

Worth the wait right!? I think so, even if you don't. I bet you can guess what I'm going to say next. Well done! Send the blog on and comment! Wow, you're psycic. Respect on that. Being psycic must be awesome.

Anyway, thanks for reading, I will try to upload another poem shortly. Much love guuuys. BOGAC READ MY BLOG FOR GOODNESS SAKE.

Kbye. =]

4 comments:

  1. LOOOOOOOOOL i was the first to read this poem . I love it Hollie. And =O im on ur blog :P XX

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  2. No you werent lol...you didnt read it til english, sir read it first i think you'll find >.< x

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  3. well.. technically i was right next to u when u wzas writing it so that counts <3 :)

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