Saturday, 20 November 2010

Morning

Heyy.

Sorry I didn't post yesterday with my other poem, I was going to, but I didn't. Children in need was on. And the internet was blocked in German. Bad times.

Anyway, happy Saturday! The weekend is here!

Now for my next poem. I wrote this the day after my last one, and I havn't written anymore since, so this might be the post before another longish break. But I'll try to avoid that happening and give it a go at writing another poem pretty soon.

Oh and, I'm past 200 blog views! Thanks for checking back so much people! But let's try and get it past 300 now, which means you can't give up on me. You gotta' keep coming back and checking for new posts, and keep sending this on, because if you don't the page views wont go up!

Back to the poem. This one's called 'What claws at the sky'. Took me a while to name it to bo honest. But that's what I came up with and it's quite good in my opinion. =]

Hope you like it. =]

These creatures and their bony arms,
Crooked dark and sinister,
Chained to them its skeletal hands,
Each with needy fingers,
Its body lost within the dark,
Consumed by the night time parasite,
Crippled with age while its arms,
Groan in the wind of the night,
Echoed cries it creaks and shivers,
Its fingers in position,
Ready to grip the passers by,
And claim the undeserving victim,
In the shadow of the glowing moon,
Illuminated by its touch,
The being stands tall and bare and broken,
And the night sky it does clutch.

Please tell me what you think. My font's gone weird again. =/

Send this on, I really appreciate your help with getting these out, I love poetry and I want my poems to be read. You're helping by sending them on, so please do!

On another note, today is the 20th November. I wanna' mention someone very missed today. Great Nanny, you'll always be missed by us, and we love you. Happy Birthday for today. =]

Ok, thanks for reading people. SEND IT ON.

Kbye. =]

4 comments:

  1. v.Good... i will update mine this week-ish maybe so stay hooked lol... can u get bare manz to view mine please... but make sure it dont get to my fam coz like yea.. u know how i feel bout that lol... thanks and keep up ur gd work!! much love <3 x

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  2. Tyty, i look forward to reading it :) man will get peeps to look init :P
    is your blog still set to private though? coz if it is, no-one will be able to see it..
    Loves you muchly <3

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  3. im not sure tbqh lool... i'll have to have a look at that my fam, try change it - but its well confusing lool <3 x

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  4. ahh okie dokie when you know or have changed it let me no init cz i will pass it on to my mandem :) x

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